Four: The Arrival — Original and Re-edited Version by @Zorlone

The Arrival

From a thousand miles they came to see the show,

The nighttime sky was slowly beginning to glow,

The lights shown bright, oh what a sight,

They sat snuck together, nice and tight,

It felt right after such a long flight,

Try not to think of saying good night.

Just sit right back and enjoy the view,

Cause they all knew, these days are few,

Just sit right back and enjoy the craze,

Before the velvet curtains are raised,

The soft white snow began to accrue,

No one cared, they weren’t subdued,

They all knew, these days are few,

They laughed and mused at the stage anew,

The greatest show of their age revived,

Just then they knew they had arrived,

Buzz— Swoosh— Boo—

[end]

Artwork: Frank Cunha III | Poetry: Frank Cunha III / Re-edited by:  Lorenzo Bernardino | More Poetry

The Arrival

They came from many miles around to see the show,
The nighttime sky was slowly beginning to glow,
The lights shown bright, what a sight,
They sat close together, nice and tight,
It felt right after such a long flight,
Try not to think of when it is time to go,
Just sit right back and enjoy the show,
They all knew, these days are few,
Just sit right back and enjoy the show,
Before the velvet curtains drew,
The soft white snow began to accrue,
No one cared, they weren’t scared,
They all knew, these days are few,
They laughed and mused at the stage,
The greatest show of their age,
Just then they knew they had arrived,
Buzz— Swoosh— Moo—
[end]

Artwork: Frank Cunha III | Poetry: Frank Cunha III | More Poetry

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Frank Cunha III 
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4 Comments on “Four: The Arrival — Original and Re-edited Version by @Zorlone”

  1. Maha Kamel says:

    ‘They all knew, these days are few’
    i love the words and artwork is gorgeous Frank…!

  2. sparticusian says:

    ▁▂▂▃▃▅▆((º>°¨❤GREAT WORK FRANK

  3. fc3arch says:

    Thanks Maha – it was a quickie but I am happy with the way it turned out, been a while since I wrote. Guess you have to “let it out” sometimes! thank you for your ongoing support and encouragement with my architecture and artwork! Best wishes in Egypt. Hope it goes the “right” way for us all : ) -FC3

  4. fc3arch says:

    Ian, You are a great friend and supporter. Keep up your cause and keep in touch my friend! Love the Land Down Under (was there in 2003, can’t believe it has been almost 10-years!!!). Best, FC3


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